After I accomplished the revision, I should have managed it organized and had a strong arguable thesis. I would change some metadiscourse sentences, paid attention in MLA in-text citations. I hope this revision is kind of “to be born again” into a new paper.
Friday, March 11, 2011
Introduction of Revision My Work
I wrote my first paper assignment which is identity about two months ago. After I got feedback from my instructors, I decided to make revision on it. This paper woke me up from my “critical unconsciousness”. This assignment had two big questions I had to answer. It is described in the guiding line, “What seem to be the greatest obstacles of challenges or the greatest contributors to developing a strong sense of self-identity?”
After I accomplished the revision, I should have managed it organized and had a strong arguable thesis. I would change some metadiscourse sentences, paid attention in MLA in-text citations. I hope this revision is kind of “to be born again” into a new paper.
After I accomplished the revision, I should have managed it organized and had a strong arguable thesis. I would change some metadiscourse sentences, paid attention in MLA in-text citations. I hope this revision is kind of “to be born again” into a new paper.
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